Dark City:

Sorry Qesun but could you be more specific with what you do with the coat? Do you put it out there and draw it back really quick? Or do you wait for the arrows to hit then sort of make it stumble back and fall out of sight? I'll post what the archers do as soon as you get back to this.

Edit: Battle Tower:

Favarin can't sense his axe Kori, or he wouldn't have had to get the help of the little lizard to find it (who, by the way, he's still carrying by the back of the neck). Also, the lizard that screamed has his axe? Or the little lizard that stole it is under the wolves?

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Curse you stumble button!

It is the lizard with the wolves that has the axe. and well it is still in sight so you could see the lizrd with the axe.

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A life, heh who needs one, I got it all here in RPing and video games.

Why didn't you say that they could see my axe before? I was about to post something completely out of character.

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I mispelled see I put sence by accident.

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A life, heh who needs one, I got it all here in RPing and video games.

But then it wouldn't be under the wolves, it would be wherever the lizard is. Unless the roof fell on him, which you didn't post. And how on earth do you misspell see with sence? c and n are on the bottom of the keyboard and e is on the top...

The grammar and spelling errors I've been seeing out of you and Pizza are starting to kind of irk me (and I know I make my own and Qesun makes his own and Ultra makes his own but you and Pizza make a whole lot) I can piece through them most of the time, but it just makes the game feel choppy to me. It's not all that hard to press the backspace or period buttons. Run on sentences make it really difficult to figure out what your character is trying to say and how their saying it, and misspelled words and grammar errors make it moreso difficult. Could you two make a little more effort to do three things, this goes for everyone myself included but mostly Kori and Pizza?

Think more about your posts before posting them (not so much you Kori mostly Pizza), I couldn't figure out at all that Favarin was in the same caves for example. You didn't put any indication that the parties were in the same places, things like that just start dragging on the game.

Make sure you have everything spelled and punctuated the right way and in a way so it reflects how your character is speaking:
"I don't care about that it is a crime and you should be punished were taking you to the prison don't resist." Is easier to read if it's posted like this --> "I don't care about that. It is a crime and you should be punished. We're taking you to the prison, don't resist." It also helps you figure out how the character's talking.

And (fully) read the OOC and all of the posts after your most recent post before you jump in and start posting. The OOC because someone may have asked you something before they post a message, which could then result in you wanting to wait until they post to make your reply. And read back, if you aren't sure of what you're replying to do a little research back into the game, it's not a race you have time to post, take it.

That's all, just be careful about what you post, it helps make the game a lot more fun in my opinion.

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Curse you stumble button!

Posted by Magicminotaur at 6:34pm on Sep. 17, 2004

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Or do you wait for the arrows to hit then sort of make it stumble back and fall out of sight?

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This would be the correct answer, except for the fact that I thrust it out there just fast enough that they can only tell that it is a quick moving humanoid appearing figure.

PS: Ontop of what Favarin said about spelling and such, I will remind you that these forums DO have a built-in Spelling Checker.

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Serrif:

Reality-(noun) illusion caused by lack of alcohol
Beer(noun) medicine used to relive people from hallucinations

Technoguild

Well, I don't know if this is the place to put this but here goes. There's a gaming section in the DnDorks board called PBF Games, and we need more players and a LOT more GMs. We have sevral games underway that could use more players. Have a look please....I know for sure that a pirate game I'm in (Adventures on the world sea) could use more players and a very well DMed game I'm in is down to one (well, two, but one needs to be raised before he can do anything.) Its mainly RL stuff thats droping out headcount...Theres also a WWII game that might take on new people. Offer to DM a game and you'll get lots of players...

Oh, I won't be checking back here so PM me if you have qestions/comments/flames for putting this in the wrong place...or just post a topic in the Game Annocment forum on Dndorks...

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-Nova

IT IS THE RESPONSIBILITY of intellectuals to speak the truth and to expose lies. --The Responsibility of Intellectuals, Noam Chomsky. The New York Review of Books, February 23, 1967.

Sorry... Can't.. I barely have enough time to post on these RP threads, much less two... My life is pretty chaotic right now. ><

...And only god and I know how many RP threads I'm in about the net. I'm RP on several sites, and sometimes, I just don't have the time to hit them all... ...though some are falling off my scopes for some reason or another. I'll keep my eye over there...

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Serrif:

Reality-(noun) illusion caused by lack of alcohol
Beer(noun) medicine used to relive people from hallucinations

Technoguild

You know, I'm noticing a steady decline in the amount of posts in this forum. The Adventure and Supa Heroes completely died, and Dark City and Battle tower aren't doing much better. What's the dealeo guys?

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Curse you stumble button!

1) I was busy this weekend, and I will be busy next weekend, too.

2) An MMORPG is pulling me back into it's evil grasp. Ultima Online is the MMORPG's name. It's been sucking up time, too.

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Serrif:

Reality-(noun) illusion caused by lack of alcohol
Beer(noun) medicine used to relive people from hallucinations

Technoguild

Bummer, you're the one that has the most interesting posts most of the time. Curse you Ultima Online, curse you I say...and the busyness too, it can have a curse or two. Oh well, hopefully this place'll pick up soon.

Oh yeah Qesun, Elves in Space is running again. I'm waiting on your post now.

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Curse you stumble button!

Thank you for the bit about Elves being back up and running.

Also, I suggest you move along in Dark City, considering were all unconcious and tied up.
Speaking of which... ...Bloody fast metabolism of mine. At least that stuff'll pass through my system quicker then it would a human. They'll be having fun when I'm awake...

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Serrif:

Reality-(noun) illusion caused by lack of alcohol
Beer(noun) medicine used to relive people from hallucinations

Technoguild

true, I'm asking for opinions in it first though. I want to know what everyone's thinking about it, any suggestions or anything. Read the very last part of my very last post, I just want a few ooc posts in there with some reactions before we get on to the next part of the story.

Edit: Jeeze...we need another RP or two (that is well DMed) in here...I mean the ones that are at least moderately active (Mine and the Tower (don't know about TSD but it doesn't seem to be that active, nor interesting at this point)) are pretty good...but otherwise this place is getting terribly desolate.

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Curse you stumble button!

I'll be honest.  I suck at developing stories for me to DM.  I have only two ideas, and one is already in use and one is reserved for the Powergamers RP Forums at The Nice.

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Serrif:

Reality-(noun) illusion caused by lack of alcohol
Beer(noun) medicine used to relive people from hallucinations

Technoguild