Behind the Games - Retros Past (Sketch Art)

I want to know what you guys think of this side-story I inserted in one of my comics Behind the Games.

http://www.sphosting.com/kensuke/btg/btg12.html
http://www.sphosting.com/kensuke/btg/btg14.html
http://www.sphosting.com/kensuke/btg/btg15.html

awwwwww, not one comment?

Patience is a great virtue.
The first one is difficult to read, I like the other two though. Art's pretty cool as well.

Thanks, and I know what you mean by the first one. -_-

I like to work with my moniters brightness dark, and because of that, it made the glowing text hard to read. And theres also the big sprites, making it hard to understand.