Danger Man!

I got my new site up!
Go to it and tell me what you like/don't like.
Danger Man (http://www.geocities.com/dangertoons)

Ah ! Geocities ! Run for the hills !

(and, uhm, site is down. typical.)

Ah ! Geocities ! Run for the hills !

(and, uhm, site is down. typical.)
Geocities is okay, it's not that bad... And what do you mean site is down?

Geocities has a nasty habit of being down a lot of the time...

But anyway, I was able to get through and check it out. Not too shabby. I especially liked the facial animations. I don't know why, but the way the mouths bob to-and-fro cracks me up.

The main down side that I noticed is that the size was so small. For the animations it wasn't that big of a deal (most of the time), but some of the text was down-right unreadable. Maybe bump the size up a notch or two. That'll help a lot.

Also, the site could use a little work. But since it seems to be pretty new, its understandable to be starting with a minimal site. I'm definitly interested in seeing where you take this.

Okay, I thought the size was a little too small(Ha! Understatement!)
I'll try and stretch it a bit... Thanks for the feedback...

And website design, that too. Yeah the bobbing mouths cracked me up. Good luck with your flashy thing.

:nervous:
How exactly DO you resize it?

Oh and about the non-readable text... I just thought of something... Here's the script to each box:

Title- Danger Man By John Richardson Ep 1: The Bomb
Scene1- Ah! It is a bomb!
Scene2- What will we do?!?!?
Scene3- Look over there!
Scene4- Danger Man: Never fear! Danger Man is here!
Guy in corner: Yay! It's Danger Man!
Scene5- DM:What seems to be the problem?
Person: There's a bomb!
Scene6- DM:Now I will throw it...
All People: Yay!
All People: Where are you going?
DM: I will see where it lands.
Scene7- None
Scene8- None
Scene9- Blimey! What's that!?
Scene10- Uh oh...
Scene11- BOOM!
Scene12- BOOM!
Scene13- Ow...
Scene14- The atomic radiation turned the kanjaroos into zombies!
Scene15- Errr...
Scene16- Ahh!
Scene17- Oops...
Ending Sequence- that's the... END!

There, hope that helps...

Oh yeah, one more thing...
I got a new flash maker so I'll start and update it... Now with voices and added scenes!
Ooooooo...

You spent all that time on dangerman, why are all the other characters stick figures? Has potential, keep it up!

Overall it's good. The mouths were funny. But the site itself needs a little more flare, it's very very plain right now. A graphic or two wouldn't hurt.
:nervous:
How exactly DO you resize it?Whadda' mean. Resize the actual panel or all of the animation?
The panel size can be fixed up by...uh...errr...crap, I need to be at my computer, the one I'm using doesn't have Flash.

The facials were hilarious. But I also agree, make them bigger.

The facials were hilarious.

The bandwith is maxed out so I can't see, but are you saying it's a porn site?

The bandwith is maxed out so I can't see, but are you saying it's a porn site?Yes and no.

Yes and no.
What do you mean 'Yes and no'!?!
No it's not!
Or is it?
...
No, no it's not...