Phantom I.Q.

http://www.geocities.com/philbeale

Hello, New here... the above URL is a link to my cartoon site
wud appreciate feedback.
cheers
FYL

Ok, well it's good that you had enough comics to critique.

What I liked: The cat Dancing around a pineapple, the art wasn't crap, and the it began to make more sense as the comic progressed.

What I didn't like: There is no next button, very important, nobody wants to hit back, and then look for the next comic in a list. Also it really isn't my kind of strip, but thats a personal preference, and should not really be counted in the critique.

Good luck with the comic.

cheers for taking a look,
Your right abt it needin a forward button, I only whipped the site together the other day quite quickly. The cat one is one of my favs aswell, totally meaningless and stupid is the angle i am going for, lol.
Your reply was quite encouraging.... i was expecting worse :>

I like you're artwork a lot, and that's saying something. I might be one of the pickiest people ever when it comes to art. I like the setup and the jokes are cute. the only thing I could say is what's already been said, a next and back button.

Melonballer... the cartoon 'future circles' :- roll on the floor stuff... heh heh

oh wow that was an oldie, thanks :grin: